I Like Parrots

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Which animal do you like best?
My answer is the parrot.
I raise(飼養(yǎng)) a parrot named Polly.
He has a blue body with a grey head and a grey tail.
His feathers are soft and smooth.
He is so friendly that he loves to play with us.
江蘇省南京市瑯琊路小學四(2)班 朱泰然
指導老師 路 瑤
學生在描寫動物時能從多角度切入,介紹動物的外貌、行為、飲食、性格等,多樣化的句式使得文章生動有趣;描寫水果時,與季節(jié)巧妙結(jié)合,形象的比喻和真切的感受讓讀者感同身受。(剩余0字)